My link to my very fun elevator pitch..
https://youtu.be/y2POilE3-lM
The feedback I got last time really helped me fine craft this speech. I still think there is a lot to improve and also this was filmed after working for 12 hours so I was feeling a bit delirious. One thing I really took hard from my last elevator pitch was the amount of Uh's I said in my speech. It felt awkward watching back so I tried to consciously not use that word at all. It may have slipped out once or twice but a definite improvement. I think it was just used as a replacement because I was trying to gather my thoughts for that next sentence and I don't want it to be a complete pause. So you fill that void with a word like "alright" or in my case "uh". I look forward to seeing the feedback for this video even though I never feel comfortable about posting anything about myself online! Anyways enjoy.
Great job Christian, I think you explained the concept really well. Considering that there are a million phone apps already I think it would be catchy to start with how the clients would benefit from the app and finalize with the general information about the app.
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