My third elevator pitch is unlisted on Youtube right here: https://youtu.be/OWD2AJD58mU
I went back through and reviewed my old elevator pitches and the comments and kind of fine tuned this video into what I liked from both. In my last elevator pitch someone recommended going through the benefits for consumers and businesses so I made sure to address that and I consciously watched my use of saying "uh" I still need to work on it but this third time I only used it like three times as a place holder and eventually it will be totally eliminated. I found anything that someone stated I should change or work on as impactful because it's things that I had not seen at first but know it will improve my future elevator pitches that I do.
I found by this third time I didn't have to retry my elevator pitch an absurd number of times. I really only had to film it three times because I had most everything memorized. I stumbled once just to regain my thoughts but I eventually finished out strong. I felt way more comfortable as well because I have done it a few more times and honestly wouldn't mind doing it again for the class.
Christian, I appreciate the energy that was given during the elevator pitch. It shows that you are passionate about your product and that makes it 10x easier to sell. The pitch was also very authentic. I do recommend to practice one or twice more before recording so that you can eliminate a few filler words such as "um" during your presentation. Other than that, great work!
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