1.) I thought the elevator pitch was good. Overall I think you talked fluently and can improve the stutters in the next practices. 2.) I liked the ending, how you wrapped it up and threw in a catchy phase to end the audience thinking they want to be a "smart consumer" 3.) At the beginning it took me 10-15 seconds to realize the problem/solution you were talking about. Try to grab my attention right off the bat.
Mobile apps have made it easier to access many services across the globe. I think you idea is unique when you say restaurants will have to purchase your hardware and would indicate the time one would have to wait for the food. I think it would be interesting if a customer would be able to search for food he/she wants to eat and narrow down on the list of restaurants in the area. Some of the information you provided are already available on other platforms, however focusing on ease of access or convenience or more user friendly would throw your technology above the existing apps
1.) I thought the elevator pitch was good. Overall I think you talked fluently and can improve the stutters in the next practices.
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3.) At the beginning it took me 10-15 seconds to realize the problem/solution you were talking about. Try to grab my attention right off the bat.
Mobile apps have made it easier to access many services across the globe. I think you idea is unique when you say restaurants will have to purchase your hardware and would indicate the time one would have to wait for the food. I think it would be interesting if a customer would be able to search for food he/she wants to eat and narrow down on the list of restaurants in the area. Some of the information you provided are already available on other platforms, however focusing on ease of access or convenience or more user friendly would throw your technology above the existing apps
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